06 of 32: story break down

So I have a basic idea of the story in my mind, next step is to get it onto paper,considering im not the best at writing a story in one go, or getting my ideas onto paper, I tried to break it down into segment, segments that includes a bullet-point kind of system that listed the characters. Their actions, area, events, and so on. using this i should be able to make up a draft story  to build on

Red RidingHood (“Action Event Editor”)

1) Opening (Reality)

-           Look: Textured/toon shaded (no outline)

-           Place: Girls Room

-           Time: Daytime) light

-  Characters: Girl (Mika)

-          Action: Drawing/ playing

-           Items: Red Sheet

-           Event: Enters Mind

2) Opening (Mind)

-           Look: Hand drawn/Toon shaded

-           Place: Forest Path

-           Time: Day Light

-  Characters: Girl (Red) and Wolf

-          Action: walking the path >Enters forest

-           Items: basket for granny.

-           Event: getting distracted
-     Outcome: Red follows some butterflies into the forest

path and meets the wolf

3) Middle 1 (Mind)

-           Look: Toon shaded/ hand drawn

-           Place: Deep Forest

- Characters: Girl (Red) and Wolf (Good)

-           Items: Flowers

-          Action: picking flowers

-           Event: Red is picking flowers and trying to catch butterfly’s..

-      Outcome: >Red meets a large  wolf

>She gets startled and falls back and hurts her hand (cut)

>wolf comes close licks the wound and helps her to her feet..

4) Middle 2 (Mind)

-           Look: Toon shaded/ hand drawn

-           Place: Deep Forest

- Characters: Girl (Red) and Wolf (Good)

-           Items: Flowers

-          Action: picking flowers > walking deeper into the forest.

-           Event: Red and the Wolf walk side by side >

Wolf tries to block reds path making her change direction >

something seems to be following them >

Wolf nocks Red aside growling at something and scars Red

-      Outcome: >Red fears the wolf and begins to run deeper into the woods

                        >Wolf chases her down. Jumping over her and landing in front.

                        >Red falls over as the wolf comes growls

                        >Red kicks the Wolf in the face and runs

            >Wolf once more starts chasing her but quickly changes path and

>Wolf Disappears into the woods

4) Ending (Mind)

-           Look: Toon Shaded

-           Place: Path to Granny’s

-           Time: Darkness

-  Characters: Girl (Red) and Wolf (bad)

-           Items Twigs in hair. Slimly Ripped Cloak,

-           Event: Red runs out from the Forest and finds the path

close to her granny’s .

-      Outcome: >Scare and sadden she makes her way to granny’s house

                        >Slows down as she sees granny’s house door open

                       

Final Action  > As Red slowly enters the house the camera pulls back to the path

> to show the Wolfs feet as it begins to charge towards her

                        > camera follows (behind wolfs head/shoulder.

                        > Red turns around as wolf lunges to her

                        >Darkness…

5) Ending (Reality)

-           Look: Textured/toon shaded (no outline)

-           Place: Girls Room

-           Time: Night Time) Dark

-  Characters: Girl (Mika)

-           Event: > Girl wakes up with a jump falling back

                        > pushes papers/toys off the table
                        > Runs out of the room

Final Action: > the camera follows her as she runs out the room,

                        > camera tilts to the floor to look at the drawings